Wednesday, November 4, 2009
I like how your paper has a lot of researches, I like the way how your using, how people used to see things in the past and how we see it now is an a strong way to use so I guess u should use it more and more in the paper and if you like ask and answer questions it be a good way 2, And I actually don’t know what to ells I can tell you to do in this papers your actually doing an amazing job! *I wish if I know the English you know* lol
h.w 19 for the second time!
I like how your paper has a lot of researches, I like the way how your using, how people used to see things in the past and how we see it now is an a strong way to use so I guess u should use it more and more in the paper and if you like ask and answer questions it be a good way 2, And I actually don’t know what to ells I can tell you to do in this papers your actually doing an amazing job! *I wish if I know the English you know* lol
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
h.w #19
Your thesis and arguments and are good and strong, I don’t think you need to change anything in them, so am try to give you some idea’s to what to write about this arguments and for evidence, so for argument one you can say that people got fat because they don’t play sport and they stay home watching t.v not playing any sport…..and you keep going on with this point, and you can say that it made ordering fast food easier to us, like you can order pizza online or call for it, so sitting home watching TVs and ordering fast food! (You can add on this how bad is the fast food and how its unhealthy and it cause some heart problems!)
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
h.w # 19
Your thesis and arguments and are good and strong, I don’t think you need to change anything in them, so am try to give you some idea’s to what to write about this arguments , so for argument one you can say that people got fat because they don’t play sport and they stay home watching t.v not playing any sport…..and you keep going on with this point, and you can say that it made ordering fast food easier to us, like you can order pizza online or call for it, so sitting home watching TVs and ordering fast food! (You can add on this how bad is the fast food and how its unhealthy and it cause some heart problems!)
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
Monday, October 5, 2009
hw # 10
http://serendip.brynmawr.edu/exchange/node/1742
"And it is not all video games, it is the one's that are rated "mature" that parents are getting for their kids. i think it is the parents fault in some way at least."
this line is the most line that toke my attention, because i think i agree with the writer point! if it wasnt the parents whos paying the money to get the little kid the (xbox, playstation3...etc) then thwy wont be adicated to it and they would be doing some other good stuff! and if the parents tell there kid if hes old enough to work and get the money to buy that video game! than when the kid have the money and see how hard he worked to get the money he would think of other better stuff to buy tha th video game i guess!
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_the_bad_effects_of_iPod
there saying how bad ipods is effecting on us from the high volume on the ear! and its true because its happening to me, i always have my ipod on the highest volume so it makes my hearing less and less! and there is another thing bad from the ipods which is keep buying the latest one and buying songs on itunes! we can buy the songs from any other website for free and save are money, and buy some other good and better stuff for us!
http://www.shvoong.com/internet-and-technologies/personal-sites/1632753-www-datelinenbc5-com/
this line was intresting "As far as dating goes you really have to be carefully if you do this on the Internet it should be done with cautious, because you really don''t know who yor''re picking up on the Internet" and its happening alot these days, 14 and 16 going on dates, do they really know what being in a realtionship means? from just seiding eachother pictures and talking on ther computer for couple of days and lets says weeks,i dont think this should make someone go with someone els on a date!
i liked the idea there giving us to make the bad effects on the kids less than when it be in there rooms, but let me ask this questions, how maney house is doing that? i think it would be %20 or probably less!
"perhaps the computer should be in the front room for everyone in your household to use, instead of in your childs bedroom"
"And it is not all video games, it is the one's that are rated "mature" that parents are getting for their kids. i think it is the parents fault in some way at least."
this line is the most line that toke my attention, because i think i agree with the writer point! if it wasnt the parents whos paying the money to get the little kid the (xbox, playstation3...etc) then thwy wont be adicated to it and they would be doing some other good stuff! and if the parents tell there kid if hes old enough to work and get the money to buy that video game! than when the kid have the money and see how hard he worked to get the money he would think of other better stuff to buy tha th video game i guess!
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_the_bad_effects_of_iPod
there saying how bad ipods is effecting on us from the high volume on the ear! and its true because its happening to me, i always have my ipod on the highest volume so it makes my hearing less and less! and there is another thing bad from the ipods which is keep buying the latest one and buying songs on itunes! we can buy the songs from any other website for free and save are money, and buy some other good and better stuff for us!
http://www.shvoong.com/internet-and-technologies/personal-sites/1632753-www-datelinenbc5-com/
this line was intresting "As far as dating goes you really have to be carefully if you do this on the Internet it should be done with cautious, because you really don''t know who yor''re picking up on the Internet" and its happening alot these days, 14 and 16 going on dates, do they really know what being in a realtionship means? from just seiding eachother pictures and talking on ther computer for couple of days and lets says weeks,i dont think this should make someone go with someone els on a date!
i liked the idea there giving us to make the bad effects on the kids less than when it be in there rooms, but let me ask this questions, how maney house is doing that? i think it would be %20 or probably less!
"perhaps the computer should be in the front room for everyone in your household to use, instead of in your childs bedroom"
hw #9
You had some background noise and a friend in the back, which is like what u “said there was life going on in your world besides just the technology world happening.”
And my bad about someone that was holding the camera for you but that’s what I thought!
Answering your question
don't you agree that you are apart of this laziness while you are using technology?
Well yes I am , but I am adicated on using the computer and being lazy after using it for years so there is no way on stopping that habit ! So I’m just dealing with it, but lately I have no time to use the computer a lot because of work and school and home works so Its stopping me from using the computer a lot!
And I liked how you decided on going on a walk with your parents rather than sitting on Facebook, this way you can talk to your parents more and get closer to them and this way they feel that your closer to them and I think it would make a better relationship than before (you sitting on Facebook and them on T.V).
I agree with you on “The world has a generic computer look. It makes us all look like lazy human beings” and its only because were all doing the same thing buying the same things, doing the same thing on the computer! Facebook or myspace or chatting talking about stupid stuff and wasting are time!
And my bad about someone that was holding the camera for you but that’s what I thought!
Answering your question
don't you agree that you are apart of this laziness while you are using technology?
Well yes I am , but I am adicated on using the computer and being lazy after using it for years so there is no way on stopping that habit ! So I’m just dealing with it, but lately I have no time to use the computer a lot because of work and school and home works so Its stopping me from using the computer a lot!
And I liked how you decided on going on a walk with your parents rather than sitting on Facebook, this way you can talk to your parents more and get closer to them and this way they feel that your closer to them and I think it would make a better relationship than before (you sitting on Facebook and them on T.V).
I agree with you on “The world has a generic computer look. It makes us all look like lazy human beings” and its only because were all doing the same thing buying the same things, doing the same thing on the computer! Facebook or myspace or chatting talking about stupid stuff and wasting are time!
Saturday, October 3, 2009
h.w #8
abe,
I like how your saying that “were becoming like robots” were actually robots to the computer in some how, because when you be on the computer if you want something you have to do something to get it, like if you want to sign in on aim you need to put your password and screen name so the computer is making you do something so your actually taking orders from the computer in some how, and it makes the person that uses the computer like a robots in my eyes! I don’t know how other people think of it, but that’s the way I think of it!
In your writing u said I felt like I had no emotions , am argue you with that1 you had emotions but you didn’t show them your just seeing your self inside the computer your focusing a lot in the computer and the videos your watching and the music your listening to and the conversation your having with your friend and you smiled in the beginning because you were looking at the camera and you have your attention to the camera so there is some emotions!
I connect what we were saying in the class about doing many stuff in the same time, to what your doing, your watching videos and recording your self and talking to your friend, so when you be watching the video you forget chatting with your friend and you put your attention on the video and when your friend sends you something you go back to the conversation and you forget about the video! And then you had to stop the recording after 2 minutes, so many stuff in one time taking your attention and making you focuses there and like not do anything else or show any other emotions!
you used the headphone and not any cell phones or TVs and Sarah used the phone and not headphones and I used everything together haha! You could have used more digital devices to make you show probably more emotions or so we can see you using many stuff!
Your video makes me consider if using the computer and not moving at all for hours and holding us from eating or eating and sitting on the computer! Makes us fatter or skinner, and if we stop using it for hours would we get better health?
I like your writing about the video and what you thing of yourself and how you look like sitting on the computer for hours but in 2 minutes video recording! And your writing popped out a thought in my head about the robot and how we are robots for computers!
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Sarah,
I enjoyed reading your writing about the video, and I liked how there was someone holding the camera for you and you were talking to them and then you told them to stop because its started recording. Hahah, and then after a little of talking to that person that’s holding the camera for you I felt like you forgot all about them you forgot that there is someone in front of you and you were focusing on the fb or MySpace whatever your doing on the internet! And then texting and then back to the computer! It toke your attention to forget someone sitting in front of you.
While you’re sitting on the internet I guess on (fb or MySpace) you were surprised from something to the level that you were chewing gum and when you saw that thing on the internet your face gave the surprised expression and you stopped chewing the gum both in the same time!
I connect how she stopped chocking gum and had the expression face to what we were talking in the class (disbodiment/displacement) that’s the person lose his/her control on what there doing from there face expression to stop chewing the gum to probably moving there hands or screaming, and that’s what happened with you Sarah you stopped chewing gum and your face gave the surprised expression!
You could have showed us what were you doing on the internet(your on MySpace or fb or watching videos on YouTube) and like it would be good too if you had a headphones on to show that you be doing more than one thing in one time like texting and computer and listening to music, even though when you be focusing on the internet or texting you forge the music you don’t hear the music anymore for a second in some how!
The video makes me consider if I be giving expression faces a lot and I was wondering how like all are attention goes to the thing were doing on the (computer or phone …etc) and we forget what were doing or the place were sitting at or even the people were sitting with! And it makes us sometimes to hold are selves from using the bathroom or eating if were hungry! But if it was homework to do we would go use the bathroom and eat and do everything and keep the homework till the end!
I really liked your video because it made me feel like I’m not just doing a homework I actually felt like I am learning something through this!
I like how your saying that “were becoming like robots” were actually robots to the computer in some how, because when you be on the computer if you want something you have to do something to get it, like if you want to sign in on aim you need to put your password and screen name so the computer is making you do something so your actually taking orders from the computer in some how, and it makes the person that uses the computer like a robots in my eyes! I don’t know how other people think of it, but that’s the way I think of it!
In your writing u said I felt like I had no emotions , am argue you with that1 you had emotions but you didn’t show them your just seeing your self inside the computer your focusing a lot in the computer and the videos your watching and the music your listening to and the conversation your having with your friend and you smiled in the beginning because you were looking at the camera and you have your attention to the camera so there is some emotions!
I connect what we were saying in the class about doing many stuff in the same time, to what your doing, your watching videos and recording your self and talking to your friend, so when you be watching the video you forget chatting with your friend and you put your attention on the video and when your friend sends you something you go back to the conversation and you forget about the video! And then you had to stop the recording after 2 minutes, so many stuff in one time taking your attention and making you focuses there and like not do anything else or show any other emotions!
you used the headphone and not any cell phones or TVs and Sarah used the phone and not headphones and I used everything together haha! You could have used more digital devices to make you show probably more emotions or so we can see you using many stuff!
Your video makes me consider if using the computer and not moving at all for hours and holding us from eating or eating and sitting on the computer! Makes us fatter or skinner, and if we stop using it for hours would we get better health?
I like your writing about the video and what you thing of yourself and how you look like sitting on the computer for hours but in 2 minutes video recording! And your writing popped out a thought in my head about the robot and how we are robots for computers!
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Sarah,
I enjoyed reading your writing about the video, and I liked how there was someone holding the camera for you and you were talking to them and then you told them to stop because its started recording. Hahah, and then after a little of talking to that person that’s holding the camera for you I felt like you forgot all about them you forgot that there is someone in front of you and you were focusing on the fb or MySpace whatever your doing on the internet! And then texting and then back to the computer! It toke your attention to forget someone sitting in front of you.
While you’re sitting on the internet I guess on (fb or MySpace) you were surprised from something to the level that you were chewing gum and when you saw that thing on the internet your face gave the surprised expression and you stopped chewing the gum both in the same time!
I connect how she stopped chocking gum and had the expression face to what we were talking in the class (disbodiment/displacement) that’s the person lose his/her control on what there doing from there face expression to stop chewing the gum to probably moving there hands or screaming, and that’s what happened with you Sarah you stopped chewing gum and your face gave the surprised expression!
You could have showed us what were you doing on the internet(your on MySpace or fb or watching videos on YouTube) and like it would be good too if you had a headphones on to show that you be doing more than one thing in one time like texting and computer and listening to music, even though when you be focusing on the internet or texting you forge the music you don’t hear the music anymore for a second in some how!
The video makes me consider if I be giving expression faces a lot and I was wondering how like all are attention goes to the thing were doing on the (computer or phone …etc) and we forget what were doing or the place were sitting at or even the people were sitting with! And it makes us sometimes to hold are selves from using the bathroom or eating if were hungry! But if it was homework to do we would go use the bathroom and eat and do everything and keep the homework till the end!
I really liked your video because it made me feel like I’m not just doing a homework I actually felt like I am learning something through this!
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