the boss: hey
the worker: hey
the boss: how you doing?
the worker: good and you?
the boss: i'm good but why the floor is not clean?
the worker: because its not my turn to clean the floor, its Susana's turn (the second
worker)
the boss: go do the floor
the worker: but its not my turn and i don't feel like doing it. Susuan go do the floor its your turn, and make your boss happy!
the second worker: i aint cleaning any floor ven if its my turn, because the boss told you to do it
the worker: hahah yeah yeah
the boss: if the floor is not clean in 2 minutes then both of u guys are kicked out.
the worker: ok i am gonna clean it but you know its not my turn and its not fair.
the boss: well thanks, what ells you want me to do?
the second worker: its only cleaning the floor its not like you gave the boss a million dollar.
the boss: well if it was that simple, why didn't you do it?
the worker: hahahah someone got shut!
the boss: well do the floor and shut up, now you got shut!
the boss: tomorrow i want you Susana(the second worker) to take off.
the second worker: why you want me to take off? i was off 2 days ago.
the boss: look i am the boss and i do whatever is right to get the business good, so tomorrow your off.
the worker: 0o0o so wait 5 minutes ago you told me hes the boss and we have to do whatever he tells us 2, then don;t come tomorrow!
the second worker: its not your business!
the boss: hes right about that, but i don't care about whats going off, i only care that tomorrow your not coming.
the second worker: alright i am not coming, just shut up both of you guys!
Thursday, November 19, 2009
Saturday, November 14, 2009
project

A picture of how we cut the vegetable and not hurt are self.
Technology = the knife
The way we use technology and how it effects on us depends on the way we use it! But an example of how that goes same as the way we use a knife, either we use it in a good way to cut the fruit or vegetable and be safe ( use the technology to get what ever we need from it and not hurt are self) and we cut are self and hurt are self by using the knife ( using technology badly in away that it hurt us )
Friday, November 6, 2009
a better final draft
Eq: How is digital technology affecting bad on our society?
‘digital representation is making us lazier and unhealthy and it reduce us to stupid chines ordering slope
technology made the kids and the teen and some of the adults stop doing there homework
and the some adults stay up all night on the video game trying to finish some video games levels and go to work late! Which it gets all of who’s using it dumber that’s what I think, because there
always doing the same think and thinking of the same thing. Which it makes there minds close (only open for video games to think) like if someone keeps doing math it helps him to get better in math, but we use math a lot in our life,but what do we get from video games that we use in our lives? And most of the video games that be played are killing games and shooting , so how is that going to help them think better and be smarter?
the people I use to live with in the middle east didn’t have that much of
electronic devices from (i-pods, TVs’, cell phones… like the 20 years and up would have cell phones but they would only use it for emergencies not to text and waste time or call girls and talk to them for hours probably talking about the same thing again and again, any American person thats living
with all of these device’s would say how are these people in the middle east are living with out any of (i-pod, laptops, new cellphone…etc)?
I think there living a better life then us, simple and easy! And there way smarter kids in school always doing there home works and studying for exam’s they don’t have face book to distract them or cell phones to text! There living a basic normal life not full of what this guy or girl wrote on my wall, or should I go out with this guy or girl and all of this things we keep thinking of from using technology, like (Face book and My space…etc) And
an example of that is me, I used to live in Palestine and then I moved to America, there I had no i-pod , I had a cell phone but
I never texted on it, I just used it for emergencies(none of electronics devices to distract me from doing my work) I used to do my work in less time than what it takes me right now, Now when I try to do my homework I be like let me check face book and do work in the same time, then it takes me an hour doing that simple home work which it actually take 10 minutes if I focused on it, and it would take like an hour and I wouldn’t give me whole attention to it and it wont be that good!
people there have less stuff to make there life easier, and there doing better than us! They workhard to go in college! Us we have financial aid for who ever doesn’t have money to pay for college and scholars ships and all of these things that’s helps getting in college, and most of the kids have trouble going in colleges! Like if the people in the Middle East had what people over here have from chances to get in colleges and study you would see %90 of them in colleges.
I am not saying there isn’t any smart people over here at all. There is , but I
don’t think they be addicted to digital devices they probably have (Cell phones and laptops…etc) but they wont use them in a way that hurt them! Like they don’t fall into those stuff a lot, there paying more attention to school and actual things that’s going to get them somewhere in life,these are the people we can call smart!
From using digital devices a lot were not paying attention to what’s happening in the World, like this ozone problem that’s happening, and its happening because of us, by (burning are garbage and using a lot of cars…etc) all of these things dirty the air and causing the ozone problem!
This ozone problem is causing a lot of bad things, one of those things, the number of The people getting skin cancer is going up, and all of what were doing is just playing video games, who cares About “68,720 person that gets a skin cancer a year”wekipedia its not us who’s getting it, We can help to stop the number on going down, but we don’t know how we going to do That, we can search it but why would we? In the 10 minutes that would take us searching
how can stop that problem, but no we want to play video games or text someone! Isn’t that Ignorant?, who knows probably next year it be one of are family who’s having that Problem!
Why couldn’t we stop all of those stuff and pay more attention to the world and What’s happening, more than what levels were at in this video game or what’s happening on that t-v show!
Technologies made are life easier but it tokes from us more than what it gave us, from being smart and healthy to being unhealthy and less smart and the worst part that were paying for these devices a lot of money like an example($230 just for an i-pod touch) we can buy food for the whole week and for the whole family with this $230 isn’t that crazy? Aren’t we paying money for something that hurting us! . I’m not saying technology is not good at all, I know it made some of things way easier than before but in the same time it hurts us if we use it wrong, a good example of it is a knife and the knife depends on how you use it, you can use it to help you cut something, and it can hurt you if you use it wrong!
and it makes the people who use digital devices a lot, get a bad health! From sitting down not moving and eating and looking at the screen not moving, but why were still doing it while we know its bad for us and how we got addicted to it?
Anyone in this world wish to have the best body and no one wish to be fat,
and the only way to get the best body is to work out or play sport but if we use a lot of digital devices and keep watching t.v and eating fast food we would never get that best body and be happy we would be fat and not happy about the way are body is, l
(to connect it again to the middle east) in the Middle East I don’t see that much of fat and unhealthy
People most of them go play sport on the weekend not Sit home in front of screens and get fatter and fatter, eating fast food the food we order on the phone because (were 2 lazy to make food in are kitchen from are clean hands and clean kitchen tools)And sitting in front of screen (TV or computer or PSP…etc) for hours not moving just opening are eyes makes the person gets fat no matter what!
What do we get from the digital devices (TVs or computers…etc) ok let’s say we use them to talk to people and it made some stuff easier, but what ells we got from it? Making some dreams and were just talking and talking and were not doing anything actual to make are dreams to come true, because we don’t have time to do anything ells from using the digital devices! So we just get those huge dreams that probably are never going to come true, I connect that huge unhappening dreams to the movie wall e the robot collect the garbage and do it as a square and put all of those squares on top of each other till he made buildings, I think those building (that made of garbage) are like the unhappening dreams were getting from the technology! The unhappening dream are like a KID having a face book and talking to ladies and he thinks he would go out with some of them and he start making more and more dreams about that, like ohh the girl being his girlfriend and a lot to go!
Kids be using internet more than adults sometimes, and most of the times they be not watched on what there doing on the internet, so most of them are getting hurted more than its helping them, like they would probably be on the intrent searching anything, and out of no where something would pop out to them showing bad pictures of girls naked or having sex, and there still kids that shouldn’t be seen that, and they would take the wrong idea of what sex is and how it goes!
then they get used to some bad habits that affects bad on there health, and makes there bone goes easier to broke when it bumbs with anything and it makes there back hurts and more pimble on there face, see we started from just using it to search some normal stuff and then we eneded up with bad affects on are health!
How we got so addicted to it and why we never stopped doing it even though we know its not good for us?
The way a person gets addicted to digital devices, goes like this “the person having nothing to do all bored sitting home after school or work, so he try to find anything to makes him get out from the bored mood he’s in, so the only thing he goes 2 is a digital device to use like(computer TVS, video games..etc), then the second time he be bored, he do the same thing, and then he have things online that makes him wants to go back and check it like”facebook, email…etc” or there is shows makes him go back to the TV to see what’s going to happen next, or wanting to finish the level of the video game your playing, little by little the person knows more and more about what’s there on the computer or t.v shows and then he be trying everything, and then HERE WERE ADDICTED, now we know that there is bad affects from it, we have to stop it or use it less than how much we do, we try and we fail because we got used to the laziness and sitting down and not moving.
it brings sickness to who use it a lot!
Yes it does bring sickness when we use it a lot, how?
When you get fatter from sitting down watching TVs and eating, the fat brings the sickness like diabetes, high blood pressure, some cancers and heart problems. These are sickness from being fat, and how we got fat, from watching TVs and eating fast food !
Another thing that affect bad on us from digital devices are vesion getting bad from the laser that the screen gives any screen (small lentando screen, T.V screen, or it can be computer screen) and then we need glass’s or contact lenses which it means paying more money, first we paid for the digital device and now were paying to fix the bad thing we got from the device we bought, its paying money and money , while we can save all of
that money and just go play sport and be active and healthy and not wear glass’s or have any sickness because were fat, all of that by just using less digital devices, we understand that many people can not live with out digital devices, or they cant imagine there life with out digital devices(that’s who’s addicted to it), but were not saying stop (text or watch t.v or face book…etc) were just saying use it less than what you do, and for who’s not addicted to digital devices, I tell them to first look at the device and think how its going to help them and how its going to make them worse, and just take the good things and leave the bad stuff! This way well has a better world and better thinkers!
Overall, digital devices are affecting bad on our society and us, its bringing
sickness to us and making us not to do are actual work and waste are time on
stupid stuff!
‘digital representation is making us lazier and unhealthy and it reduce us to stupid chines ordering slope
technology made the kids and the teen and some of the adults stop doing there homework
and the some adults stay up all night on the video game trying to finish some video games levels and go to work late! Which it gets all of who’s using it dumber that’s what I think, because there
always doing the same think and thinking of the same thing. Which it makes there minds close (only open for video games to think) like if someone keeps doing math it helps him to get better in math, but we use math a lot in our life,but what do we get from video games that we use in our lives? And most of the video games that be played are killing games and shooting , so how is that going to help them think better and be smarter?
the people I use to live with in the middle east didn’t have that much of
electronic devices from (i-pods, TVs’, cell phones… like the 20 years and up would have cell phones but they would only use it for emergencies not to text and waste time or call girls and talk to them for hours probably talking about the same thing again and again, any American person thats living
with all of these device’s would say how are these people in the middle east are living with out any of (i-pod, laptops, new cellphone…etc)?
I think there living a better life then us, simple and easy! And there way smarter kids in school always doing there home works and studying for exam’s they don’t have face book to distract them or cell phones to text! There living a basic normal life not full of what this guy or girl wrote on my wall, or should I go out with this guy or girl and all of this things we keep thinking of from using technology, like (Face book and My space…etc) And
an example of that is me, I used to live in Palestine and then I moved to America, there I had no i-pod , I had a cell phone but
I never texted on it, I just used it for emergencies(none of electronics devices to distract me from doing my work) I used to do my work in less time than what it takes me right now, Now when I try to do my homework I be like let me check face book and do work in the same time, then it takes me an hour doing that simple home work which it actually take 10 minutes if I focused on it, and it would take like an hour and I wouldn’t give me whole attention to it and it wont be that good!
people there have less stuff to make there life easier, and there doing better than us! They workhard to go in college! Us we have financial aid for who ever doesn’t have money to pay for college and scholars ships and all of these things that’s helps getting in college, and most of the kids have trouble going in colleges! Like if the people in the Middle East had what people over here have from chances to get in colleges and study you would see %90 of them in colleges.
I am not saying there isn’t any smart people over here at all. There is , but I
don’t think they be addicted to digital devices they probably have (Cell phones and laptops…etc) but they wont use them in a way that hurt them! Like they don’t fall into those stuff a lot, there paying more attention to school and actual things that’s going to get them somewhere in life,these are the people we can call smart!
From using digital devices a lot were not paying attention to what’s happening in the World, like this ozone problem that’s happening, and its happening because of us, by (burning are garbage and using a lot of cars…etc) all of these things dirty the air and causing the ozone problem!
This ozone problem is causing a lot of bad things, one of those things, the number of The people getting skin cancer is going up, and all of what were doing is just playing video games, who cares About “68,720 person that gets a skin cancer a year”wekipedia its not us who’s getting it, We can help to stop the number on going down, but we don’t know how we going to do That, we can search it but why would we? In the 10 minutes that would take us searching
how can stop that problem, but no we want to play video games or text someone! Isn’t that Ignorant?, who knows probably next year it be one of are family who’s having that Problem!
Why couldn’t we stop all of those stuff and pay more attention to the world and What’s happening, more than what levels were at in this video game or what’s happening on that t-v show!
Technologies made are life easier but it tokes from us more than what it gave us, from being smart and healthy to being unhealthy and less smart and the worst part that were paying for these devices a lot of money like an example($230 just for an i-pod touch) we can buy food for the whole week and for the whole family with this $230 isn’t that crazy? Aren’t we paying money for something that hurting us! . I’m not saying technology is not good at all, I know it made some of things way easier than before but in the same time it hurts us if we use it wrong, a good example of it is a knife and the knife depends on how you use it, you can use it to help you cut something, and it can hurt you if you use it wrong!
and it makes the people who use digital devices a lot, get a bad health! From sitting down not moving and eating and looking at the screen not moving, but why were still doing it while we know its bad for us and how we got addicted to it?
Anyone in this world wish to have the best body and no one wish to be fat,
and the only way to get the best body is to work out or play sport but if we use a lot of digital devices and keep watching t.v and eating fast food we would never get that best body and be happy we would be fat and not happy about the way are body is, l
(to connect it again to the middle east) in the Middle East I don’t see that much of fat and unhealthy
People most of them go play sport on the weekend not Sit home in front of screens and get fatter and fatter, eating fast food the food we order on the phone because (were 2 lazy to make food in are kitchen from are clean hands and clean kitchen tools)And sitting in front of screen (TV or computer or PSP…etc) for hours not moving just opening are eyes makes the person gets fat no matter what!
What do we get from the digital devices (TVs or computers…etc) ok let’s say we use them to talk to people and it made some stuff easier, but what ells we got from it? Making some dreams and were just talking and talking and were not doing anything actual to make are dreams to come true, because we don’t have time to do anything ells from using the digital devices! So we just get those huge dreams that probably are never going to come true, I connect that huge unhappening dreams to the movie wall e the robot collect the garbage and do it as a square and put all of those squares on top of each other till he made buildings, I think those building (that made of garbage) are like the unhappening dreams were getting from the technology! The unhappening dream are like a KID having a face book and talking to ladies and he thinks he would go out with some of them and he start making more and more dreams about that, like ohh the girl being his girlfriend and a lot to go!
Kids be using internet more than adults sometimes, and most of the times they be not watched on what there doing on the internet, so most of them are getting hurted more than its helping them, like they would probably be on the intrent searching anything, and out of no where something would pop out to them showing bad pictures of girls naked or having sex, and there still kids that shouldn’t be seen that, and they would take the wrong idea of what sex is and how it goes!
then they get used to some bad habits that affects bad on there health, and makes there bone goes easier to broke when it bumbs with anything and it makes there back hurts and more pimble on there face, see we started from just using it to search some normal stuff and then we eneded up with bad affects on are health!
How we got so addicted to it and why we never stopped doing it even though we know its not good for us?
The way a person gets addicted to digital devices, goes like this “the person having nothing to do all bored sitting home after school or work, so he try to find anything to makes him get out from the bored mood he’s in, so the only thing he goes 2 is a digital device to use like(computer TVS, video games..etc), then the second time he be bored, he do the same thing, and then he have things online that makes him wants to go back and check it like”facebook, email…etc” or there is shows makes him go back to the TV to see what’s going to happen next, or wanting to finish the level of the video game your playing, little by little the person knows more and more about what’s there on the computer or t.v shows and then he be trying everything, and then HERE WERE ADDICTED, now we know that there is bad affects from it, we have to stop it or use it less than how much we do, we try and we fail because we got used to the laziness and sitting down and not moving.
it brings sickness to who use it a lot!
Yes it does bring sickness when we use it a lot, how?
When you get fatter from sitting down watching TVs and eating, the fat brings the sickness like diabetes, high blood pressure, some cancers and heart problems. These are sickness from being fat, and how we got fat, from watching TVs and eating fast food !
Another thing that affect bad on us from digital devices are vesion getting bad from the laser that the screen gives any screen (small lentando screen, T.V screen, or it can be computer screen) and then we need glass’s or contact lenses which it means paying more money, first we paid for the digital device and now were paying to fix the bad thing we got from the device we bought, its paying money and money , while we can save all of
that money and just go play sport and be active and healthy and not wear glass’s or have any sickness because were fat, all of that by just using less digital devices, we understand that many people can not live with out digital devices, or they cant imagine there life with out digital devices(that’s who’s addicted to it), but were not saying stop (text or watch t.v or face book…etc) were just saying use it less than what you do, and for who’s not addicted to digital devices, I tell them to first look at the device and think how its going to help them and how its going to make them worse, and just take the good things and leave the bad stuff! This way well has a better world and better thinkers!
Overall, digital devices are affecting bad on our society and us, its bringing
sickness to us and making us not to do are actual work and waste are time on
stupid stuff!
Wednesday, November 4, 2009
I like how your paper has a lot of researches, I like the way how your using, how people used to see things in the past and how we see it now is an a strong way to use so I guess u should use it more and more in the paper and if you like ask and answer questions it be a good way 2, And I actually don’t know what to ells I can tell you to do in this papers your actually doing an amazing job! *I wish if I know the English you know* lol
h.w 19 for the second time!
I like how your paper has a lot of researches, I like the way how your using, how people used to see things in the past and how we see it now is an a strong way to use so I guess u should use it more and more in the paper and if you like ask and answer questions it be a good way 2, And I actually don’t know what to ells I can tell you to do in this papers your actually doing an amazing job! *I wish if I know the English you know* lol
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
h.w #19
Your thesis and arguments and are good and strong, I don’t think you need to change anything in them, so am try to give you some idea’s to what to write about this arguments and for evidence, so for argument one you can say that people got fat because they don’t play sport and they stay home watching t.v not playing any sport…..and you keep going on with this point, and you can say that it made ordering fast food easier to us, like you can order pizza online or call for it, so sitting home watching TVs and ordering fast food! (You can add on this how bad is the fast food and how its unhealthy and it cause some heart problems!)
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
h.w # 19
Your thesis and arguments and are good and strong, I don’t think you need to change anything in them, so am try to give you some idea’s to what to write about this arguments , so for argument one you can say that people got fat because they don’t play sport and they stay home watching t.v not playing any sport…..and you keep going on with this point, and you can say that it made ordering fast food easier to us, like you can order pizza online or call for it, so sitting home watching TVs and ordering fast food! (You can add on this how bad is the fast food and how its unhealthy and it cause some heart problems!)
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
for argument 2 you can talk about how we just start by one text message or just trying to check face book and then from just trying to check it you stay for hours and then you go on conversations with friends that you cant cut, see we started from just checking and ended up staying online for hours and you cant stop!
argument 3 I don’t get the point of it, I am sorry I cant think of any idea’s to help you talking about it!
Argument 4 I think you can talk how when people watch some movies it affects on them to the level it changes the way they live there life, which is to the bad! And it makes them want to do some crazy stuff like killing people or even killing themselves or when they see some romance movies and it gives them those wrong idea’s about love….you keep going on that point!
*I hope I helped you ,I know your smart and you going to do great, good luck!
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